1. The Title
-Make the title short
>>>(Accepted) I will try to come up with a shorter title that is related to the news
2. The Conclusion
-Stronger conclusion
-The conclusion is somehow too weak
>>>(Accepted) I will try to state a more specific and stronger perspective to indicate the angle
3. In Addition
-Maybe you can add some of your own thoughts, to echo the first paragraph
>>>(Accepted) I will add more of my own view and angle in the news
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